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Abhivyakti Me Aapki Pratikriya 1860 25.02.2012, at 21:07:01 Aapka Naam: ramu Email: nagar.038@gmail.com Where are you from?: mp india Rachana Ka Shirshak: babakibakayiyan Lekhak Ka Naam: Comments: uttam sujhawhai aadi rid wale prani sidhe chaltehai jaise pashu tathasidhi rid wale tede chaltehai jaise manaw 1859 25.02.2012, at 16:51:13 Aapka Naam: ram thapa Email: ramthapa009@yahoo.com Where are you from?: Iraq, baghdad Rachana Ka Shirshak: mansahari bhojan ati uttam Lekhak Ka Naam: I have no idea Comments: mujhe ye lekh padhkar bahut achha laga.main bhi mansari se jyada sakahari achchha lagta hai.maine bhi mans thoda khata hun.lekin aj yeh padhkar mere dil men aisa laga ki mans ko sada sada ke liye tyag kardu. 1858 25.02.2012, at 09:16:46 Aapka Naam: manmohan faizal Email: au.manmohan@yahoo.com Where are you from?: melbourne Rachana Ka Shirshak: jo uske pita nhi the Lekhak Ka Naam: priyedarshan Comments: shehar ya zindagi ki bheed main gum ho chuke rishton ko khone ki tees ko lekhak ne baakhoobi bayaan kiya hai,iske liye lekhak badhaee ke paatar hain. 1857 24.02.2012, at 16:29:39 Aapka Naam: Prof.Bharati Sanap Head of Hindi Dept.Govt.College Email: bhartisanap@gmail.com Where are you from?: Aurangabad,Maharashtra Rachana Ka Shirshak: nhgfd Lekhak Ka Naam: bhgfd Comments: Abhivyakti ek srujanmulak aur bodhak patrika hein. 1856 23.02.2012, at 20:11:53 Aapka Naam: atul jaiswal Email: atuljais4@gmail.com Where are you from?: Kanpur Rachana Ka Shirshak: Regarding some queries... Lekhak Ka Naam: Atul Jaiswal Comments: Hi Abhivyakti, I am Atul Jaiswal. I am regular reader of this weekly magazine.First of all I want to appreciate your vision and initiative to create a hub in which we can link to our mother tongue with fabulous stories and all. If there is a possibility that relatively new writers like me can also join your forum than let me know. It will be my pleasure to be the part of this initiative. I have written many poems and some short stories since last 10 Years in both Hindi and english some in urdu as well, and some of my poems have also published in Hindi news papers. I have been born and brought up in Kanpur, UP. After completing my Engineering I joined Infosys Ltd. Hyderabad, and working here from last 3 years as a software Engineer. Thanks and Regards Atul Jaiswal mail:atuljais4@gmail.com Mobile:9235406541 1855 23.02.2012, at 17:36:23 Aapka Naam: PRAKASH Email: pcb5252@yahoo.co.in Where are you from?: India, West Bengal, Asansol Rachana Ka Shirshak: Shiwatwa Ke Bina Sunderta Moolya-heen Hai Lekhak Ka Naam: Dr. Durgadutta Pandeya Comments: AAp Ke Sunder Bisleshan Ke Liye AApko Dher Saari Shubh Kamnayen. Aisi Hee Rachanon Se Aap Hame, Samaj Ko, Nayee Peedhi Ko Su-Sanskarit Karte Rahen Namaskar Prakash Chandra Baranwal Asansol M - 9832207277 1854 20.02.2012, at 20:38:13 Aapka Naam: PRAN SHARMA Email: pran69@gmail.com Where are you from?: U.K Rachana Ka Shirshak: SAHITYA SAMACHAAR Lekhak Ka Naam: PURNIMA VARMAN Comments: SAHITYA SAMACHAR ACHCHHA STAMBH HAI .DESH - VIDESH KEE ANEK SAHITYIK JAANKAARIYON SE PARICHAY HOTAA HAI . ` VIDYA VACHASPATI ` AUR AKSHRAM SAHITYA SAMMAN MILNE PAR SUSHRI USHA RAJE SAKSENA KO BADHAAEE . DEVMANI PANDEY KO BHEE UNKE GAZAL SANGARAH KE LOKAARPAN PAR BADHAAEE . 1853 17.02.2012, at 16:00:58 Aapka Naam: आर.वी. सिंह Email: rvsingh@sidbi.in Where are you from?: भारत- लखनऊ Rachana Ka Shirshak: काश Lekhak Ka Naam: ललित कुमार आतिश Comments: कहानी किसी अपरिचित द्वारा प्रेषित डिब्बे में छिपी किसी अनजानी वस्तु के प्रति पनपे अनजाने से भय को लेकर चलती है,और अंततः जब रहस्य से पर्दा उठता है तो मानवीय संबंधों की गहराई की ऐसी बानगी पेश करती है, कि मन भीग उठता है। इतनी सुन्दर रचना के लिए लेखक को मेरी हार्दिक बधाई। सादर, 1852 17.02.2012, at 09:22:00 Aapka Naam: Shashank Srivastava Email: cheakymickey@gmail.com Where are you from?: Noida Rachana Ka Shirshak: मियाँ तुम होते कौन हो? Lekhak Ka Naam: अनिल रघुराज Comments: Excellent story & excellent site. Made me cry several times. I never go against my family & its also true that my family loves me a lot. Just got reminded of my extra caring Mummy - Papa & Di. Missed a person very much while reading the story. She used to be an integral part of my life before she parted her ways with me. Beautiful expressions, choice of words & flow. Loved every part of it. Rock ON!!! 1851 15.02.2012, at 19:38:34 Aapka Naam: sandhya shukla Email: sandhya1795@yahoo.com Where are you from?: Rachana Ka Shirshak: kash Lekhak Ka Naam: lalit ahaluwaliya Comments: kahani bahut hi acchi hai. dil k kone ko choo kar aankho ko nam kar deti hai 1850 13.02.2012, at 11:00:04 Aapka Naam: latika Email: itslatika@gmail.com Where are you from?: ranchi Rachana Ka Shirshak: ek geet aur kaho Lekhak Ka Naam: purnima burman Comments: bahut acchi kavita hai ye :) 1849 12.02.2012, at 23:11:26 Aapka Naam: Ashok kumar Jain Email: ashok_jain_78@yahoo.com Where are you from?: Meerut ,India Rachana Ka Shirshak: Gaend Lekhak Ka Naam: Chitra Mudgal Comments: Bahut marmik evam hardaya sparshi chitran hai.sanyukta parivaron ke tootne se samasya badhi hai.Lekhika ko hamari aur se badhaiyan. 1848 10.02.2012, at 14:42:52 Aapka Naam: Santosh Luthra Email: santoshluthra@gmail.com Where are you from?: Pune,India Rachana Ka Shirshak: Gend Lekhak Ka Naam: Chitra Mudgal Comments: talleen kar dene waalee kahaanee .parh kar khatam karte hee jo pratikriya ubharee --Zindee KEE maut par VIJAY ,ek bachche kee intzaar aur use kriket kaa kit khareed dene se use aur unhe khud milne waalee khushee kee kalpana ne ek sangee- saathee ke daah sanskaar par jaane kee rasm-rivaaz par vijay paaee. 1847 06.02.2012, at 21:43:22 Aapka Naam: basant mishra Email: basantmishra63@gmail.com Where are you from?: jabalpur Rachana Ka Shirshak: uttam Lekhak Ka Naam: girish mukul Comments: bahut sundar likha 1846 06.02.2012, at 20:44:32 Aapka Naam: Akhilesh Malviya Email: akhil0465@gmail.com Where are you from?: Gurgaon Haryana India Rachana Ka Shirshak: Abhivakti ki sabhi kahaniya Lekhak Ka Naam: Sabhi hindi lekhak Comments: Abhivyakti jaisa nam hi kafi hain. Abhivyakt karti ke aam aadmi se lekar khas aadmi ke jeevan ke har pahlu, utar chadav, dhhop chaav ko. Eisa lagta hai jaise kahi n kahi har kisi ki jindagi enhi kahanyo ke ird gird buni hui hai. Kisi kahani vishesh ke bajay har lekhak ki har kahani dil ko gahre tak choo leti hain. Aap sabhi jo bhi es portal / sangrah aadi se joode hue hain hardik dhanyavad. 1845 01.02.2012, at 07:48:35 Aapka Naam: Bholeshwar Vashisth. Email: sahityabharti.vashisth@gmail.com Where are you from?: Dholpur, Rajasthan. Rachana Ka Shirshak: bade kam ki cheej hai aatankbad. Lekhak Ka Naam: Abhiranjan Kumar. Comments: अभिरंजन कुमार की रचना "बड़े काम की चीज है आतंक बाद " रोचक लगी . 1844 31.01.2012, at 18:50:45 Aapka Naam: pawan pandey Email: pawanpandey56@gmail.com Where are you from?: chhattisgarh Rachana Ka Shirshak: mod Lekhak Ka Naam: gyan prakash vivek Comments: vivek ji yah kahani bahaut achhi lagi. sach ke karib lagati hai. itani sundar kahani ki rachna ke liye bahat shubhkamana.pawanpandey. 1843 29.01.2012, at 18:01:30 Aapka Naam: AMRENDRA KUMAR Email: amrendracug@gmail.com Where are you from?: JHARKHAND Rachana Ka Shirshak: SWETAR KE FANDE Lekhak Ka Naam: SHILA INDER Comments: SHILA INDER KI KAHANI SWETAR KE FANDE BAHUT HI ACHI KAHANI HAI JO VARTAMAN SAMAY KI ISTITHI KO PARDARSIT KARTI HUI ADHUNIK AUR PURANE SAMAY KI MANSIKTA KE BICH KE DWAND KO SPAST KARTI HUI EK NETIK MULYE KO KHOJANE KA PRAYAS KARTI HAI 1842 26.01.2012, at 16:54:30 Aapka Naam: adarsh Email: adarsh4love@gmail.com Where are you from?: bangalore Rachana Ka Shirshak: chota jadu gar Lekhak Ka Naam: jaishanker prasad Comments: good 1841 24.01.2012, at 20:46:15 Aapka Naam: जगदीश त्रिपाठी Email: tripathijagdish24@gmail.com Where are you from?: पानीपत Rachana Ka Shirshak: भुज का भूकंप Lekhak Ka Naam: ओमप्रकाश तिवारी Comments: तिवारी जी की डायरी का यह अंश उस विभीषिका को तो बयान ही करता है भुज के बारे में बहुत सी जानकारी भी देता है। काश फिर कभी ऐसा न हो। जगदीश त्रिपाठी 1840 24.01.2012, at 14:55:33 Aapka Naam: Santosh Luthra Email: santoshluthra@gmail.com Where are you from?: India Rachana Ka Shirshak: abhinetriayan Lekhak Ka Naam: Vibharani Comments: kahaani ka sheershak 'Abhinetriayan' barha sateek hai Jaylakshami aur Nagamma donon working women aur housewife ke kirdaar bakhoobi nibhaati hain saath hee saath ek voter kaa bhee aankhon hee aankhonmein muskara kar apne raajneetigya pation ko aabhaas nahin hone detin ki unkaa vote kiske paksh mein gaya hai chunaav ke season mein yah rachna aur bhi prabhavee ban jaati hai 1839 23.01.2012, at 20:36:45 Aapka Naam: श्रीकान्त मिश्र ’कान्त’ Email: skant124@gmail.com Where are you from?: चन्डीगढ़ - कोलकाता Rachana Ka Shirshak: अभिनेत्रियाँ Lekhak Ka Naam: विभारानी Comments: विभारानी की कहानी- अभिनेत्रियाँ के दोनों प्रमुख पात्र जयलक्ष्मी और नागम्मा गीता के अर्जुन और कृष्ण के संवाद की भांति कथानक को आगे बढ़ाते हुये बड़ी कुशलता से अनजाने ही कथ्य को पाठक के मन की गहरायी तक उतार देते हैं। जयलक्ष्मी एक उच्च मध्यम वर्ग के तथा नागम्मा समाज के बहुसंख्य वंचित वर्ग के नागरिकों का प्रतिनिधित्व करती है। दोनोम के चरित्र कथानक के लिये एक दूसरे के पूरक है। सामयिक परिदृश्य और देश के राजनीतिक धरातल को बड़ी सुन्दरता के साथ लेपेट कर एक सार्थक सन्देश देती हुयी संकेत से ही राष्ट्रीय चुनाव के अवसर पर मतदाता को अपनी स्वतन्त्रता के लिये जागरूक होकर यदि अन्यान्य पथ अपनाकर भी उचित की रक्षा करने के सन्देश के साथ एक स्मित के साथ पाठक को छोड़ती है। सुगठित कथा शिल्प और सार्थक कथानक के साथ सुन्दर कहानी - साधुवाद 1838 19.01.2012, at 15:24:11 Aapka Naam: vivek martolia Email: vivekmnnit@yahoo.co.in Where are you from?: india Rachana Ka Shirshak: sweater ke fandey Lekhak Ka Naam: sheela indra Comments: adbhut krati 1837 18.01.2012, at 14:33:44 Aapka Naam: Kshitij Sharma Email: ksharma082@gmail.com Where are you from?: Haridwar, Uttarakhand Rachana Ka Shirshak: Ghar Lekhak Ka Naam: Santosh Goyal Comments: Ye kahani ek bahut hi khoobsoorat aur man ko choo lene wali kahani hai jo padhnewalo ke man ke un tilismo or pencho ko kholne ka ek mathyam bhi hai, jinme admi na chahte hue bhi buri tarah na jane kab ulajh jata hai. Lekhak ko meri taraf se bahut bahut shubhkamnayen. 1836 18.01.2012, at 13:04:08 Aapka Naam: mukesh meena Email: arjunbadgoti@gmail.com Where are you from?: jaipur Rachana Ka Shirshak: valentine's day Lekhak Ka Naam: ajay kumar Comments: such a awesome and heart touching story tht also avail a moral tht noone shd run towards shadows..... noone shd live in fantasies.....thanks a lot to provide a splandid story that i charish through out...all the best... Back to ABHIVYAKTI 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 >>
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