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Abhivyakti Me Aapki Pratikriya 1810 16.12.2011, at 22:09:28 Aapka Naam: ravi Email: Where are you from?: jaipur Rachana Ka Shirshak: ek aur suraj Lekhak Ka Naam: jiten thakur Comments: wastav me badiya kahani hai. Aadmi ko ahsas b nahi hota ki wo pagal ho raha hai. 1809 16.12.2011, at 06:30:15 Aapka Naam: आर सिंह Email: rs122331@rediffmail.com Where are you from?: NCR Rachana Ka Shirshak: हमाम में Lekhak Ka Naam: कृष्ण कुमार अग्रवाल Comments: यह व्यंग्य, हमाम में सब नंगे है का एक अच्छा खाका प्रस्तुत करता है.सच्चाई भी यही है. 1808 13.12.2011, at 11:03:25 Aapka Naam: NEELAM Email: SANJAYNEELAM.2011@REDIFFMAIL.COM Where are you from?: DELHI Rachana Ka Shirshak: CHITTHI AAYEE HAI Lekhak Ka Naam: KAMLESH BHATT KAMAL Comments: AAPKI RACHNA DIL KO CHHU GAYI YADI HAR KAOI MAKKHAN KI TARHA SOCHE TO SAMAJ MAIN AAURAT KA DARJA SHAYAD KUCH UNCHA HO JAYE AUR USKO DUKHO SE CHUTKARA MIL JAYE 1807 10.12.2011, at 19:56:51 Aapka Naam: shailendra Email: shailbhadoria@hotmail.com Where are you from?: calgary canada Rachana Ka Shirshak: badal chand gaye Lekhak Ka Naam: Comments: In the material world this is a good story bases on good relations-very well written 1806 10.12.2011, at 04:53:35 Aapka Naam: हरिराम Email: harirambamberwal@gmail.com Where are you from?: KISHAN GARH Rachana Ka Shirshak: शिशु विकास Lekhak Ka Naam: ईला गौतम Comments: सुंदर !! आप का अध्ययन माता पिता के लिए बहुत उपयोगी है 1805 08.12.2011, at 14:43:46 Aapka Naam: nikita savadiya Email: nikitasavadiya@gmail.com Where are you from?: bhavnagar(gujrat) Rachana Ka Shirshak: ek ghar sapnoka Lekhak Ka Naam: maltijoshi Comments: malti joshi ki kahaniyo par me shodh karya kar rahi hu aapki ek ghar sapnoka kahani sangrah me samprat samsiya par apni kalm chalakar samaj ki alichana karke hame avgat karne ka safal prayas kiya he. 1804 07.12.2011, at 23:18:29 Aapka Naam: ved Email: vedprakashnishad@yahoo.com Where are you from?: raipur c.g. Rachana Ka Shirshak: sara deta pa jayega beta Lekhak Ka Naam: ashok chakradhar Comments: samsamik ghatnao par adaharit vayang ka put hai. padkar bahut khushi hui. dhanywad. 1803 07.12.2011, at 19:07:31 Aapka Naam: Dr. Prabhakar Kumar Awasthi Email: awasthi_pra@yahoo.com Where are you from?: Fatehgarh Rachana Ka Shirshak: Nav Geetkar Kailash Gautam Lekhak Ka Naam: Team Abhivyakti Comments: Kya likhoon? Kahan se likhoon? Shabda bas man mein umad-ghumad kar rah jaate hain jab Shradhyeya kailash ji ki yaad aati hai.Baat 1986 ki hai jab main pahli baar kailash ji se unke Allahabad ke radio station mein mila tha. Aadarneeya Shri Shiv om Amber ji ne mujhase kaha ki tum Allahabad jaa rahe ho to kailash gautam ji se bhi mil lena.So milane gaya, University campus se radio station aate-aate khoob baarish mein bheeg gaya tha tab kya pata tha ki kailash ji ke Hridya se hone vaali Amrit-Varsha mujhe aajeevan bhigoti rahegi.Studio main Chai peene ke baad unhone seedha sawal mujhase kiya kuch likhate ho? maine haan men sar hila diya aur kaha Choti-Choti kavitaayen likhata hun. To doosara Atmeeya Nivedan sunao? iss paristhiti ki kalpana nahi ki thi aisa lag raha tha main bolunga aur kailash je seedhe seedhe record karate jayenge, us samya recording instruments ke baare main jyada pata nahi tha,is liye dar bhi lag raha tha ki kahin ganda-sanda na record ho jaaye . Kisi tarah ek do kavitaayen suna kar baad ke liye taal diya.par vah choti si ek mulaakaat Aadarneeya kailash ji ko mere Hriday main aise baitha gayee jaise kisi ne tapta bhumi men Atmeeyata ke beej gaarh diye hon aur apane adrishya aashirvachano ki varsha kar dee ho.Unako Mera Shat-Shat Naman. Aapko bahut-bahut Dhanyavaad. Prabhakar Kumar Awasthi 1802 07.12.2011, at 06:59:53 Aapka Naam: Aparna Email: aparnababa@yahoo.co.in Where are you from?: Kochi Rachana Ka Shirshak: मुलाक़ात Lekhak Ka Naam: शिबन कृष्ण रैणा Comments: Very interesting and relevant story 1801 06.12.2011, at 18:34:28 Aapka Naam: D.S.Dwivedi Email: hindisir@hotmail.com Where are you from?: Indian School Al Seeb Oman Rachana Ka Shirshak: sansmaran geetkar Kailash Gautam Lekhak Ka Naam: team abhivyakti Comments: aap ne bhai kalash gautam ke baare men likh kar shreshth shrandhajali di hai.unaki rachanon men mere desh ki maatee ki sugandh rachi-basi hai. saadhuvad 1800 06.12.2011, at 18:13:25 Aapka Naam: D.S.Dwivedi Email: hindisir@hotmail.com Where are you from?: Indian School Al Seeb Oman Rachana Ka Shirshak: Sharda Lekhak Ka Naam: Comments: bahuth hi sundar kahani hai.sadhuvad!!!!!!!!!!!! 1799 06.12.2011, at 12:29:57 Aapka Naam: Dr Vishwa Deva Sharma Email: vishwadevs@yahoo.com Where are you from?: Mumbai,India Rachana Ka Shirshak: Hindi ko ....... Lekhak Ka Naam: Dr Paramanad Panchal Comments: 1s61 Is lekh mein bahut upyogi sujhav diya gaya hai. Kash is ko karyanvit kiya ja sake, anyatha purskaron aur UPSC ki pareekhaon mein pariganit hone ke utsah mein boliyan Hindi se alag ho kar Hindi ko samapt kar deingi! Dr Panchal ka abhinandan! 1798 06.12.2011, at 01:27:41 Aapka Naam: PRAN SHARMA Email: prans69@gmail.com Where are you from?: COVENTRY , UK Rachana Ka Shirshak: SHARDA Lekhak Ka Naam: MAHENDRA DWESAR Comments: ABHIVYAKTI PAR SHRI MAHENDRA DWESAR KEE KAHANI `SHARDA` PADHEE HAI .. SHILP AUR KATHYA KE NAZARIYE SE KAHANI MUJHE BAHUT ACHCHHEE LAGEE HAI . STARIY KAHANI PADHWAANE KE LIYE ABHIVYAKTI KO DHANYAWAAD . 1797 29.11.2011, at 16:05:43 Aapka Naam: सुभाष नीरव Email: subhashneerav@gmail.com Where are you from?: New Delhi, India Rachana Ka Shirshak: अभिलाषा Lekhak Ka Naam: माधव नागदा Comments: बहुत ही सुन्दर लघुकथा लगी… अन्त ने तो छू लिया भीतर तक। 1796 28.11.2011, at 15:36:59 Aapka Naam: vandana soni Email: vandanasoni2112@gmail.com Where are you from?: Rachana Ka Shirshak: apradhnini Lekhak Ka Naam: shivani Comments: nari ke pratek pahloo ko dikhati aisa novel hai jo hindi sahitya mein anmol hai 1795 26.11.2011, at 21:43:55 Aapka Naam: suresh giri Email: surdegana@gmail.com Where are you from?: nagour[raj.] Rachana Ka Shirshak: padma aur lili Lekhak Ka Naam: nirala Comments: kya ye rachna adhuri hai..... Lekhak ka mantawya spasyh nahi ho paya... 1794 26.11.2011, at 01:01:27 Aapka Naam: देवेन्द्र सिँह राजपूत 9971709811 Email: rajpootdsingh.151@gmail.com Where are you from?: बदायूँ (उत्तर प्रदेश) Rachana Ka Shirshak: सयानी बुआ Lekhak Ka Naam: सयानी बुआ Comments: नश्वर वस्तुओँ मेँ मोह रखना दुःख का मूल है । 1793 21.11.2011, at 10:52:53 Aapka Naam: usha mantri Email: ushamantri46@gmail.com Where are you from?: mumbai Rachana Ka Shirshak: Is dard ki dava kya hai Lekhak Ka Naam: ashok gautam Comments: I want Email ID of writer. Thanks 1792 17.11.2011, at 13:47:59 Aapka Naam: yudhisthir Email: vashisthshanu@rediffmail.com Where are you from?: jaipur Rachana Ka Shirshak: railgadi Lekhak Ka Naam: pata nahi Comments: khani ko aur thoda accha banaya jaa sakta thaaaa,,,any way,,,it was ordinary,,,but well try 1791 16.11.2011, at 21:24:25 Aapka Naam: ibs Email: singhib4@gmail.com Where are you from?: rkl Rachana Ka Shirshak: बच्चा Lekhak Ka Naam: akaancha yadav Comments: जो बालमन को पढ़ कर उसे समझ न सके वही बच्चा है |इस लघु कथा में लेखक पिता ही बच्चा है, न कि उसका बेटा | बड़ों को मार्ग दर्शाती अति सुन्दर लघु कथा 1790 14.11.2011, at 06:28:35 Aapka Naam: रामेश्वर काम्बोज 'हिमांशु' Email: rd_kamboj@yahoo.com Where are you from?: नई दिल्ली Rachana Ka Shirshak: बच्चा Lekhak Ka Naam: आकांक्षा यादव Comments: कमज़ोर और नकारात्मक सोच की कथा। 1789 10.11.2011, at 14:14:09 Aapka Naam: ranbbir Email: dahiyars@rediffmail.com Where are you from?: Haryana Rachana Ka Shirshak: Log Lekhak Ka Naam: Ravinder Batra Comments: Achhi lagi laghu katha 1788 07.11.2011, at 11:51:05 Aapka Naam: Shallu Email: purolab@rediffmail.com Where are you from?: New Delhi Rachana Ka Shirshak: Rishtey Lekhak Ka Naam: Manmohan Bhatia Comments: Aajkal jo bhi rishtey hai vo sab jhootey hai hum bhi inhi rishton ki vajeh se parshan hai kyunki aap chahey jitna bhi rishteydaron ke saath karle vo kabhi bhi aap ko ahmiat nahi denge isliy har rishtey ko pani nazar se dekhe kabhi vishwas na karey. 1787 07.11.2011, at 09:49:57 Aapka Naam: pankaj kumar Email: pankajsharma55555@gmail.com Where are you from?: bihar Rachana Ka Shirshak: phool si pali Lekhak Ka Naam: dr.sudha gupta Comments: outstanding work read ever. i love haiku and want to create my own haiku in both japanese and hindi as iam a japanese language learning student. much inspired by these works..... 1786 06.11.2011, at 15:53:49 Aapka Naam: rajesh rajoriya Email: nalandapublicschoolsilwani@rediffmail.com Where are you from?: silwani dist raisen mp Rachana Ka Shirshak: vishwash sabse badi doulat he Lekhak Ka Naam: r r Comments: vishwash khone me samay nhi lagta lekin vishwash jitne me yug bit jate he , so hame kisi ka vishwash nhi todna chahiye Back to ABHIVYAKTI << 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 >>
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